Goretober Day 1

Yes, goretober is here. I'll start it off positive. The lines are very clean and smooth as well as the way you place the proportions such as the arms and the upper half of the torso. The blood placement and trickles are well placed and shaded as well. However, I read some of the others critique. If you are going for a creepy vibe + gore then somehow the background is darker and the atmosphere has to be eerie. The lines being messy is considered to give out a lot of a creepy feel. That is if you are going for that. Though for the gore part you put it out well. The heart though should be bleeding out from the arteries and ventricles. Shadings are nice and well blended. Overall, very good piece of artwork for Goretober.